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Everything is falling apart,
I can feel the ripples glide through me,
like pebbles skipping across a peaceful ocean.
But, I feel so alone,
that I cannot begin to fathom the pain that takes hold of each nerve.
I feel paralyzed, trapped in this dystopic society.
I can't even protect the people I love from these despicable dangers.
There's nothing left but tainted memories, burned by the flames of each puff of smoke you release.
Like photos caught afire, it burns deeper and deeper.
Nothing left but a pile of forgotten debris.
This person I once was is lost in this unorganized mess, as I sift through what is left.
All because I took that one opportunity,
to feel free again.
It toppled my heart, like dominoes falling in unison with one another.
It tumbles and crashes,
it tramples the soul like an insolent creature, not fit to live.
I know I'm not worth it, but why did it have to be like this?
The rain wafts over me like a shower of tears,
all that is left is broken and torn apart, burned or charred.
How did this happen you may ask?
Just because I tried it, once.
I can feel the ripples glide through me,
like pebbles skipping across a peaceful ocean.
But, I feel so alone,
that I cannot begin to fathom the pain that takes hold of each nerve.
I feel paralyzed, trapped in this dystopic society.
I can't even protect the people I love from these despicable dangers.
There's nothing left but tainted memories, burned by the flames of each puff of smoke you release.
Like photos caught afire, it burns deeper and deeper.
Nothing left but a pile of forgotten debris.
This person I once was is lost in this unorganized mess, as I sift through what is left.
All because I took that one opportunity,
to feel free again.
It toppled my heart, like dominoes falling in unison with one another.
It tumbles and crashes,
it tramples the soul like an insolent creature, not fit to live.
I know I'm not worth it, but why did it have to be like this?
The rain wafts over me like a shower of tears,
all that is left is broken and torn apart, burned or charred.
How did this happen you may ask?
Just because I tried it, once.
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When I wrote this, I believe that it could be related to whatever you want to refer "it" as. It's basically a blank line that says "FILL IN." It has a universal meaning, depending on how you want to portray it. The intended moral is more personal to myself, but I wanted to make it legitimately simpler for others to connect to as well. (:
[A/N: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I'M BACK! XD... oh and referring to the title... excuse the awkward connection to the text. LOL.]
[A/N: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I'M BACK! XD... oh and referring to the title... excuse the awkward connection to the text. LOL.]
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Umm, brilliantt much!? loll I reallyy likkedd thiss !!
itss veryy goodd andd I cann literallyy feell yourr emotionn.!
itss veryy goodd andd I cann literallyy feell yourr emotionn.!